And the text gets a little illegible on the white clouds at the top, even with that drop shadow on the text. I think it would have been better to have framed out the content below the first paragraph and shift over the text more inward, since the spacing around the edges are kind of all over (what I mean is, the bottom legal facts are more in, while the above content is out more—I'd align them a bit better and you really don't need that indent before "Play as any…"). When it comes to the back, I like the image you used of the three of them together and the way Terra's keyblade breaks out of the frame, but I'm confused as to why you chose to do a right angle frame. I understand wanting to use those images, but it may have done better for you to scale down the box a wee-bit. I can tell you scaled them up somewhat, instead of finding something larger to work off of. Like, some of the renders aren't that great in quality when you examine it at full-size, such as Aqua on the front. Especially love the way the front is and the way the concent is broken down, but there are some minor things I feel like that should be fixed.
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